[For the avoidance of doubt]

[desperance]

No, there's nothing unusual in this. Partly she's working from a house style sheet - which of course I abominate - and partly from one of the formal manuals, Chicago or whatever. She has rules about where commas go. Actually so do I, but our rules are different. And she's just not catching the rhythm, some people don't if they don't hear me read aloud: so she doesn't get the repetitions, she sees the same word three times in a paragraph and thinks it's a mistake. She thinks I make a lot of mistakes.

Also not-at-all-unusual? Is that I'm fussing. On the internets, because, y'know. Here you are.

That's all. She's doing her job, I'm doing mine. You're doing yours. Carry on.