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desperanceI has fire engines, ambulance and policepersons in squad cars, right outside my windows. This is not so unusual (there's a junction; there are accidents), only I hadn't actually noticed, until I went downstairs to rinse the melon-rinds and refill the wineglass. It takes focus, y'know, all this revising.
(I have cut 5000 words out of the last 16,000. Which is about an ideal ratio, tho' I don't expect to keep it up; but oh, it is hard word. Unwriting takes as much effort, and as much time, as writing does. Word for word, more or less.)
(I have cut 5000 words out of the last 16,000. Which is about an ideal ratio, tho' I don't expect to keep it up; but oh, it is hard word. Unwriting takes as much effort, and as much time, as writing does. Word for word, more or less.)