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Sigh. My copy editor is clearly of that tendency that believes you cannot hiss without a sibilant, meaning in this instance at least one "s" in the sentence.

I think this is mere superstition. I think it's perfectly possible to supply your own sibilance, a generic hissiness in the breath around the words. I also believe that "whisper" is no substitute for "hiss". But of course I have no opportunity to explain this, to propound my beliefs in a footnote.

So. If I stet this, will the reading world mock me for a fool? Will it rise up as one, crying "Absurdity! Unhissable! There is no "s" in that sentence!" and should I therefore leave her substitution intact?

Or should I recast the sentence so that it does have a sibilant?

Aargh. I am cleft on the horns of the third alternative.

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