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On p 142 out of 290pp, I gazed at the mess she'd made of my paragraphing and tried to work out on my fingers why she'd done that, whyever she'd think it was better that way; and gave that up fairly quickly, and considered stetting everything back the way it had been - and finally thought, "Oh, I don't care," and scrolled on.

I usually hit this point, somewhere along the line. My choices or theirs, it really doesn't matter. The words remain the same. Layout does have impact, there is a visual rhythm too, a sense of pacing down the page - but it's marginal, and it's not worth fighting over. I just want this gone now.
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