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[desperance]

Eww. I just wrote "He was pale, fixed, his eyes staring." Oh, please. What else about him is going to stare? I told you I was tired...

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Oh, lawks, I'm sorry. I am soooo sorry... (Mind, I do recognise the moment; I've been stared at by toes before now. It's just one of those facts that is inadmissible in the court of fiction; the defence "but that's what happened" is no defence at all...)