Consistency is good. Means you're getting the voice right, to the extent of using all the right trigger-words in the right proportions. Or however their metric works.
Have you read Kipling's Dayspring Mishandled" (http://whitewolf.newcastle.edu.au/words/authors/K/KiplingRudyard/prose/LimitsRenewals/dayspring.html)? Can't say why you should, for fear of spoilers, but it is not irrelevant to getting the voice right.
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Date: 2006-12-01 03:31 pm (UTC)Have you read Kipling's Dayspring Mishandled" (http://whitewolf.newcastle.edu.au/words/authors/K/KiplingRudyard/prose/LimitsRenewals/dayspring.html)? Can't say why you should, for fear of spoilers, but it is not irrelevant to getting the voice right.